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Teen Poetry #5

my love grows

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

0 posted 2002-08-12 06:07 AM

my love grows for you everytime i see you
but you do not know that
i love you as much as i do
well i have,
i have loved you for 3 years!
still you do not know
i want to tell you
i just know how to tell you
i just want to hold you and kiss you
but yet i cannot
day and night i think about you
i don't want to wait any longer i have to tell you
but how?
when is the right time?
i guess my heart will tell me when.
but for now i will just stay your frien
untill it is the right time.

you either like me for who i am or you don't like me at all

*~p.r.i.n.c.e.s.s.~*
Junior Member

since 2002-07-25

Posts 38

1 posted 2002-08-12 10:19 AM

I really liked this....Partly I think becuz I'm going through the same thing and I've been trying to get those feelings out in a poem, but you did it for me!

Thanx!! LOL, well, I don't know if there is ever a right time to tell a friend that you're in love with them if you know what I mean. But the best of luck to you anyway hun!
Luv Alwayz:
~*~Brittney~*~

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

2 posted 2002-08-12 01:43 PM

right now it's even harder to know if it's the right time cus his brother just got murdered so i dunno if i should love is confusing.

you either like me for who i am or you don't like me at all

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

3 posted 2002-08-12 08:36 PM

*big hugs*

CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

4 posted 2002-08-14 03:38 AM

I like this one Robin. One of my favorites from you. I've been through this before, and I totally know how it is. It sucks... And you've shown how heartbreaking it is to want someone that's right there, yet you can't have them, or at least dont know how to get to them. Anyway, great write.

      - Cody -

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