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StellarChica
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floating down a river...

0 posted 2002-08-07 04:30 PM



Here's a little ditty I wrote last night. Hehe, I just wanted to say ditty.


1 AM:
Me and the solitude of darkness,
Accompanied by my old friend Mariah Carey,
Finding comfort in my strawberry yogurt.

1:30 AM:
Me and my lonely bedroom,
With an unusually cool breeze from the window,
Thinking maybe I could write you a letter.

2 AM:
Me and the annoyance of sleeplessness,
Along side a pain in my stomach that won't go away,
Realizing that you moved and I don't have your address.


Ok, well..thanks for reading!

*~erin~*


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1 posted 2002-08-07 06:59 PM


Heh. I liked this. It was very cute, and if it continued to 3 and 4 a.m. I'd be able to relate to it. Nice little ditty, this one.

  ~Carly

"Feelings are not supposed to be logical. Dangerous is the man who has rationalized his emotions."
  ~David Borenstein

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