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Punk Angel
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since 2001-07-25
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Pennsylvania, US

0 posted 2002-08-06 10:50 PM



You’re not my father,
You were never there.
And I know it wasn’t hard
To pretend you didn’t care.

I hate you ‘dad’,
I really truly do.
How many hints will it take?
When will it get through?

You didn’t raise me.
You wouldn’t even try.
You left everything to mom,
I SAW how you made her cry.

Mom always WAS stubborn,
GOD, she was blind.
She went through hell because of you
A real life was hard to find.

But don’t worry, were stronger now.
We will always make it through.
But then, we didn’t have much of a choice, did we?
So we did the best we could do

So how does it feel NOW dad,
Now that you’re the one left behind?
We have a REAL father now,
All it took was a little time…


i havent posted any poetry in awhile, felt most of it was too personal, but wut the hey, u guys have been thru the same stuff 2 prolly, so juss thought id share this one!

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Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...
1 posted 2002-08-06 10:54 PM


Kris~ i know how u feel in this poem cuz u tell me about ur dad and stuff, i think this poem suits everything u tell me about him and i'm glad u finally r posting agen. u know i'm always here 4 u.LyLaS Later~

~Ultimately, we are all dead~Proximo

Punk Angel
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since 2001-07-25
Posts 66
Pennsylvania, US
2 posted 2002-08-07 06:43 PM


thanks staci, i think outta neone, ud prolly be the main person to realize wut i meant in this poem, but dont automatically think im gonna post all my poems now, i juss did that one cuz u told me to! lol
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