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Cinderelly
Member

since 2001-12-31

Posts 189
NM, USA

0 posted 2002-08-04 08:58 PM

City lights glitter,
people shimmer,
streets buzz with excitement,
the city @ night.

A blue sky above,
people pushing though the busy streets,
a "rush, rush" world at yet a relaxed pace,
the city by day.

The city that never sleeps: New York, New York.

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

1 posted 2002-08-06 09:45 AM

beautiful description of New York
let's see how you can describe Las Vegas

thanks for sharing

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donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.

anya
Member

since 2002-07-27

Posts 393
London, UK

2 posted 2002-08-06 01:55 PM

I really like this, you caught something about the feel of a big city, I love that feeling, have never been to New York but I bet the feeling is the same there as it is here in London, anyway well done
anya

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

3 posted 2002-08-13 06:49 PM

I looove New York!

I liked your second stanza better...it seemed more original. I like the "rush, rush" "New York, New York" thing you had going on, too.

~Carly

"Feelings are not supposed to be logical. Dangerous is the man who has rationalized his emotions."
~David Borenstein

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

4 posted 2002-08-14 04:18 AM

great poem i really liked it hope to see more from you. tks for the read.
robin

you either like me for who i am or you don't like me at all

fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

5 posted 2002-08-14 05:25 AM

hey,
i have never actually been to new york city in reality (in my dreams i have quite often though lol) i think your short description did it justice, i especially enjoyed the first two lines. the title was nice too.
-bergundy-

maybe i'll catch fire, something nice to warm me. something pure to burn away the darkness, that hides inside my mind. -alkaline trio-

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