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Riley 
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain 
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This is for a guy I met on the internet and he hasn't replyed to any of my e-mails lately and well here it is.... you tell me i love you over an e-mail or two but not seeing your smiling face not knowing that your really smiling it hurts me to much i don't know you mean what you say so i ignore it scared that you do really love me but even more scared that you won't but as i go to sleep i picture what you really look like and fall into a deep slumber Better check that I'm about to upset and I'm glad now so you better step back I'm taking over so watch me shine-Joanna Pacitti/Watch Me Shine |
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StellarChica Member
since 2002-07-06
Posts 207floating down a river... |
Wow, this poem really hit home for me. And I can relate all too well to this. It's frustrating, isn't it? *sigh* Well, this was a really great poem. Good luck with this guy. Thanks for sharing!  "I like Erins...especially the you kind."-Ryan :D |
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Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
ahhh, how frustrating it is, no. well he hasn't replyed in like a month and I am really kinda like, where are they! yea, well good luck to you to. ~*Riley*~ Better check that I'm about to upset and I'm glad now so you better step back I'm taking over so watch me shine-Joanna Pacitti/Watch Me Shine |
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paper doll Member
since 2002-08-04
Posts 133Floating on Uncertainty |
Ah internet relationships...they're interesting. I didn't really enjoy this piece because it lacked sustinence but I'm sure with a bit of work it could bloom into something fantastic. Just watch your spelling and grammar. ~M Imagination=nostalgia for the past, the absent; it is the liquid solution in which art develops the snapshots of reality. |
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