Teen Poetry #5 |
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Together |
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Chel2082 Junior Member
since 2002-07-23
Posts 40Baltimore, MD |
You tell all your friends we're a couple We do things together I see you checking out the other girls You pretend nothing happened You think we will always be together If I wasn't here what would you be doing? You think we will always be together While you are getting your mack on How long do you think I will stay? Should I pretend nothing happened? We never fight Cause we are always there for each other How long do you think this will last? Can we still pretend? Will we still be together, Through thick and thin, Better or worse. Where would you be if we weren't....together? With GOD all things are possible...<3 CHEL |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
Reminds me of the Martina McBride song "Where would you be," which has the same concept. Kind of an interesting thing to think about... Anyway, I liked this, good write. Thanks for sharing. - Cody - |
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Skyfire![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Unfortunately I know this situation. This is a great expression of what your feelings are. Thanks for the good read! |
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Chel2082 Junior Member
since 2002-07-23
Posts 40Baltimore, MD |
Thank you for the replies...I do apperciate them. Glad you liked this piece. With GOD all things are possible...<3 CHEL |
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paper doll Member
since 2002-08-04
Posts 133Floating on Uncertainty |
Unfortunately we all go through emotions like this when we're with someone. I hope for you that these feelings pass and you two can get on with enjoying eachothers company. As for the piece, it was nicely structured with some good points. Thanks for posting it. ~M Imagination=nostalgia for the past, the absent; it is the liquid solution in which art develops the snapshots of reality. |
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