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REPOST: "Snowflies"
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REPOST: "Snowflies" |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
Silver spoons And crescent moons Floating in the sky. I wondered how, I wondered why A silly cow could fly. And,"Hey there, sir." With chilly brrs He turned around to see. "Moo." He cried, And then I sighed When snowflies came to me. + + + + + It's a beautiful night, and nothing seems to make sense, except that people don't care. And suddenly, it's cold outside. Sorry...needed a repost...just because everything suddenly makes sense. But...I've lost inspiration. I shall be back when I have something better... -Leah- |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
I think I read this before, but I like it more this time! Thanks for reposting  |
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Android 17
since 2001-07-21
Posts 664Winnipeg |
I thought you hated reposts! :P Others are too in love with the sound of their own voice to speak the truth... |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
I like it. It's kind of whimsical and pretty sounding.. with a twist. You know what I mean? I have a difficulty putting myself into words. "if you know me so well then tell me which hand do I use?" Tori Amos |
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paper doll Member
since 2002-08-04
Posts 133Floating on Uncertainty |
Interesting. You've twisted quite a few ideas around and made them into a piece that really does make a lot of sense. There are some deep thoughts happening here even if they are hard to find. It's made me think...thank you for that. ~M Imagination=nostalgia for the past, the absent; it is the liquid solution in which art develops the snapshots of reality. |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
This is such a wonderful poem, I believe that I have read it before but, I'm glad that you reposted it as it is so very different to the other stuff on the forums, great work by the way Andrew "If you are afraid of wolves, stay out of the woods" |
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