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Teen Poetry #5

I give you permission...

LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

0 posted 2002-08-01 09:05 PM

I give you permission to judge this book by its cover
Just learn how to read amid my bindings
It’s amazing, your findings-
I’m not who you think I am
I give you permission to judge this book by its cover
But be careful with the delicate pages between
Little details can go unseen-
I’m not who you think I am
I give you permission to judge this book by its cover
But don’t just read letters, words, and lines
You’re missing those pivotal signs-
I am not who you think I am
I give you permission to judge this book by its cover
But please give my pages a try
Just one chapter and you’ll see why-
I’m not who you think I am

~Lisa

Kandi
Member

since 2000-06-14

Posts 354
North of Hell

1 posted 2002-08-02 01:04 AM

Ummmm....WOW

This was soooo good...i'm amazed...it's so simpy written yet so very powerful. Excellent work - one of my favorites!
K

The day you were born, you were born free
That is your privilege.

Chel2082
Junior Member

since 2002-07-23

Posts 40
Baltimore, MD

2 posted 2002-08-02 09:04 AM

That was wonderful...I loved reading it. I t was a powerful piece. Keep it up.

<3 Chel

With GOD all things are possible...<3 CHEL

Kevin

Senior Member

since 1999-11-02

Posts 729
Torrington, Ct, Usa

3 posted 2002-08-02 09:14 AM

THATS MY SISTER!!!!!

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

4 posted 2002-08-05 12:25 PM

That is by far your best I've read so far! Congradulations on this one... awesome!

Check out my poetry here:

http://www.unknownpoets.com/db/authors/master

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

5 posted 2002-08-05 01:01 AM

Lisa... wow... *big grin* great job!

MIdsummerRain
Member

since 2002-05-19

Posts 175
St. Louis, Missouri

6 posted 2002-08-05 01:25 AM

"...I give you permission to judge this book by its cover
But be careful with the delicate pages between
Little details can go unseen-
I’m not who you think I am..."

Incredibly Deep & Profound...Enjoyed this ~Rayne

One day Men will look back & say
that I gave birth to the 20th Century

Jack the Ripper ~1888

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