Teen Poetry #5 |
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only time will tell |
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anya Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 393London, UK |
Why does time do this? keeps us forever guessing how it will effect us, will it let us bloom into something beautiful or will it make us wilt and ebb away? and so it goes that only time will tell, but when will it tell me? go on,whisper it in my ear cause I really need to know how the following days,weeks,years will effect the mix of me and him but time and time again, time keeps it's secrets and laughs at impatient minds like mine |
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Kevin![]()
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
I like your poetry alot anya, the way you approach things is very unique this is clever in its own right Just a small grammar thing I would change keeps to keep to make it fit with the first part of the line good job here |
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anya Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 393London, UK |
thankyou for your kind comment, i'm glad that you liked it |
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anawnda Member
since 2002-07-26
Posts 113 |
this id reelly nice, hope to read more of your work, great job!@!! |
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paper doll Member
since 2002-08-04
Posts 133Floating on Uncertainty |
Time and relationships never go hand in hand. You're always running against the stream of one or the other. The usage of time and secrets tied in well together. Thanks for the read. ~M Imagination=nostalgia for the past, the absent; it is the liquid solution in which art develops the snapshots of reality. |
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