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Teen Poetry #5

Long Distance Phone Calls

StellarChica
Member

since 2002-07-06

Posts 207
floating down a river...

0 posted 2002-07-31 11:08 PM

Miles apart,
I'm going insane,
Tell me you're okay,
Because I'm dying over here,
We listen to the same song,
Sitting late into the night,
Our speechless form of communication,
Tell me you're smiling,
Because I'm crying over here,
We talk of mundane things,
Tell me what you're really thinking,
Our evading way of showing true feelings,
Tell me you're okay,
Because I'm dying over here,
Miles apart,
I'm going insane.

*~erin~*

"Little holes in parachutes won't leave you falling, if they do, it's because you want to land."-Something Corporate

Voiceless
Senior Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind

1 posted 2002-08-01 12:10 PM

Long distance things always tend to be that
way.. which is crappy.. but yeah..
Good job thanks for posting!

Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial)

anya
Member

since 2002-07-27

Posts 393
London, UK

2 posted 2002-08-01 04:57 AM

I liked this alot, so full of emotion, good job
anya

Xaphan
Junior Member

since 2002-05-29

Posts 22

3 posted 2002-08-02 02:34 AM

Ohmigawd I can't TELL you how much I can relate. I dated off the net for a year straight because I thought I'd never meet anyone near me. You capture the feelings of frustration very well. Good write

Chel2082
Junior Member

since 2002-07-23

Posts 40
Baltimore, MD

4 posted 2002-08-02 08:33 AM

This was a good piece...stuff I can relate to even if I don't wanna. Keep up the good work.

<3 Chel

With GOD all things are possible...<3 CHEL

StellarChica
Member

since 2002-07-06

Posts 207
floating down a river...

5 posted 2002-08-02 12:41 PM

Xaphan, that is exactly my problem. I met this great guy online and it's just really frustrating..grrr..*sigh* oh well. See my sig yeah that's him..why must he be so wonderful? Aaaahh! Ok enough of my problems.

*~erin~*

"I like Erins...especially the you kind."-Ryan :D

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