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Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

0 posted 2002-07-31 08:30 PM

Beads of water
Upon the window
Representing
My silent tears

Washing down
Pain felt deep
Only you
On my mind

The last look I got
Last kiss I found
I miss you more than
I did when I had you

I miss your laugh
Your smile and eyes
I miss the way you looked
When my name was mentioned

Gone are the days
When pleasure were mine
Only silent torture
In my lacking soul

I miss your hand
Upon my face
Drying my tears
Washing them away

Now your hand
Is not there
To comfort me
Torment forever

Better check that I'm about to upset and I'm glad now so you better step back I'm taking over so watch me shine-Joanna Pacitti/Watch Me Shine

StellarChica
Member

since 2002-07-06

Posts 207
floating down a river...

1 posted 2002-07-31 09:10 PM

That was really sad it *almost* made me cry. I enjoy things that do that to me. Is that weird? I think it is. Anyway, great great poem.

*~erin~*

"Little holes in parachutes won't leave you falling, if they do, it's because you want to land."-Something Corporate

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

2 posted 2002-07-31 10:40 PM

I don't think it is all to wierd( how do you spell that word?), but close. LOL. Thank you. I really put my heart and maybe even a little soul into that. Thanks again!

~*Riley*~

Better check that I'm about to upset and I'm glad now so you better step back I'm taking over so watch me shine-Joanna Pacitti/Watch Me Shine

Kevin

Senior Member

since 1999-11-02

Posts 729
Torrington, Ct, Usa

3 posted 2002-08-01 09:57 AM

Hi riley

I really enjoyed this poem
But especially the part about the look on their face when you name was mentioned

Thats a dead give away of someones feelings
Thanks alot for this

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

4 posted 2002-08-01 09:23 PM

Your welcome, glad you liked it.

~*Riley*~

Better check that I'm about to upset and I'm glad now so you better step back I'm taking over so watch me shine-Joanna Pacitti/Watch Me Shine

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