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Pollita
Member

since 2002-07-25

Posts 220
the unknown realm of insanity

0 posted 2002-07-31 05:28 PM

You can be so harsh,and cruel.
Sometimes mean,calls me a fool.
Just because i'm a little different.

Everythings changed now.
We don't even keep in touch.
I miss you as my friend.
You'll never know that much.
You'll always be with me even though,
You pretend not to care.

You used to be there for me,
Whenever i needed you.
But now you're only there when me day couldn't get any worse.

Anything you say is offensive.
I don't know where to start.

It still makes me cry at night.
Knowing we're still in a fight!

Wanting him is hard to get.Loving him is hard to regret.Losing him is hard to accept.But with all the hurt ifelt,letting go is the most painful yet

Voiceless
Senior Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind

1 posted 2002-08-01 12:06 PM

oh i hate those kind of fights...
grr...
this was well done.
I would work on the setup a bit
which is only cause i always like
to have mine more formatted..
even though the format that i choose
i never fit.. oh well!
Anyway many truthes here. good job!

Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial)

Pollita
Member

since 2002-07-25

Posts 220
the unknown realm of insanity

2 posted 2002-08-01 12:15 PM

why thank you voiceless i really am glad you liked my poem...or at least i hope you did.

anya
Member

since 2002-07-27

Posts 393
London, UK

3 posted 2002-08-01 05:02 AM

I really liked this alot, great transcription of those feelings
anya

Kevin

Senior Member

since 1999-11-02

Posts 729
Torrington, Ct, Usa

4 posted 2002-08-01 09:36 AM

Hi pollita,

I like the way you've dialogued the confusion and sadness that friends go through when they are disagreeing

You can make this even better by cleaning it up a little bit spelling and grammar wise

Keep writing
Kev

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

5 posted 2002-08-01 03:08 PM

I understand this very well. Friendships are just as much work as relationships at times, aren't they? Sure friends are forever- if you can make it that far.

Nice job
Jenn

Why is it that we are at our most ingenius only when trying to destroy the things that keep us alive and thriving?

Pollita
Member

since 2002-07-25

Posts 220
the unknown realm of insanity

6 posted 2002-08-01 09:22 PM

thanks everyone.ya i'll work on the spelling thanks for pointing that out kev.
yes sometimes friendships are as hard as relationships!thank you everyone.!

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