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StellarChica Member
since 2002-07-06
Posts 207floating down a river... |
It's out in the open now, You can't take it back, I thought I'd be happy, Knowing you feel the same, But all I feel is empty, All of your 'I would if I could..' statements, Are leaving a dull pain in my stomach, I'm cursing this distance, And trying to stay sane, While persuading you to run away, So you can be closer to me, It's out in the open now, And we can't ever go back. *~erin~* "Little holes in parachutes won't leave you falling, if they do, it's because you want to land."-Something Corporate |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Just one thing, some should have ended with a period instead of a comma But all in all the poem was well expressed thanks for sharing là où est mon amour? |
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