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Teen Poetry #5

will it be the same

anya
Member

since 2002-07-27

Posts 393
London, UK

0 posted 2002-07-29 02:24 PM

I haven't heard your voice in a long while,
my memories are beautiful,
but are they rose-couloured?
I couldn't stand it if we no longer
shared that spark
or if we made polite conversations,
interspersed with streches of silence

Cause ever since I was a child we were
always so...intense
You sometimes made me cry with your
undiluted honesty
and I hope we won't be guarded,
guarded against the gifts I know we can
give each other

So I know it's been some time
but my mind still ponders the mystery
of you for a while each day
I hope you have thought of me too
well, i'll be seeing you soon my love
here's to hoping it will be the same

Local Parasite

Member Elite

since 2001-11-05

Posts 2527
Transylconia, Winnipeg

1 posted 2002-07-29 07:14 PM

Ah, interesting... a poem written for deaf ears, to an audience that isn't expected to listen. I like this kind of addressive poetry, that directs a certain party, discusses that party, but never anticipates anything of a response.

It's very therapeutic to write this kind of poem. If this is a cathartic poem, I hope you feel better.

Parasite

Kevin

Senior Member

since 1999-11-02

Posts 729
Torrington, Ct, Usa

2 posted 2002-07-30 04:04 PM

Ditto LP
I liked this alot anya
I think I'm gonna have to look some of your other work up

anya
Member

since 2002-07-27

Posts 393
London, UK

3 posted 2002-07-30 05:08 PM

glad you liked it but you won't really be able to look up any of my other work as have only just started posting here this week
anya

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