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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
Kinky flava spilling onto a room, As Feathers of cradled touch, Blair through pores of even touch. Sheets of stylized silk Crinkled with obscure sweat, As bodies of endearment cradle to an even crown. Orgasms surround the room, There’s nowhere to go, But the deep filled moan Shackled betrayal blindly forgotten, As bodies are fought for, With an envious love Bedposts ring with a singing tune, As pupils widen with contagious jazz. A newly discovered language with an accent of tranquility. Sweat roughs the muzzled faces, While shadows paint a picture of love on the wall, Only to be abruptly soured. Ring, Ring….. That was my wife, I must go, Until tomorrow, I shall confess my love [This message has been edited by Tomer (07-29-2002 03:06 AM).] |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
Hey tomer, I loved the everything in this poem but the first stanza, I just had no clue what you were talking about after that though, this was great the ending is a perfect punchline I enjoyed this alot That jazz line is great  kev |
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