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*~p.r.i.n.c.e.s.s.~* Junior Member
since 2002-07-25
Posts 38 |
**i dunno how good any of these are, but i have to have somewhere to post them, even if they suck, lol. thanx 4 readin' em tho!**\ I look at this picture of you and me Wondering where we went wrong How could things get so bad When they were good for so long? I still love you so much And I can't let you go But you've hurt me for the last time And I can't take this anymore. At first i thought i deserved it And you were the best that i could get But i deserve so much better Though I haven't found him yet. Of course you know I'll forgive you For all the pain you put me through But I'll never forget, What that pain made me do.... I don't regret our time together Although now it hurts so bad, But I'd never go through it again- This time I won't take you back. |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
These are popular feelings for a poet. Despair, disdain... but you finish your poem with a statement of independence, of a learning experience. So sad that these lessons need be learned so bitterly. What an excellent moral conclusion to this poem. It's important to understand this sort of experience. Well done. Parasite |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
It's always nice to write about our personal experiences You have shown it very well I know a lot of people chose to write this form but I never get tired of it beautiful expression of one's self thanks for sharing là où est mon amour? |
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anya Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 393London, UK |
oh I really liked this one, i can really relate and this poem is a great transcription of those feelings, well done anya |
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