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Chel2082 Junior Member
since 2002-07-23
Posts 40Baltimore, MD |
To feel you next to me To hear you whisper in my ear To listen to you speak to me when you're down I'm lost without you To watch you outside playing with little kids To need you in the middle of the night To want you close to me I'm lost without you Without you It's hard to breathe Without you It's hard to see Without you It's hard to feel Beacuse without you I am lost With GOD all things are possible...<3 CHEL |
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anya Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 393London, UK |
I really like this, but then again I am always a sucker for sentimental poetry, think mabey it is a bit heavy on the cliches but the emotion still comes through really well anya |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
Hi chel, The things you hold dear in this poem are very indentifiable to me Watching you play with little kids outside Needing you in the middle of the night I liked this alot thank you for sharing kev |
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