Teen Poetry #5 |
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What is Heaven? |
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Dean Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 120Canada |
What is Heaven? What is heaven? Will we meet again? You were a friend to all no matter, what happened in the end. Why did you leave us? Where did you go? You were loved all too much, to see you go. Your life was one with much stress, but all through out it, you always did your best. You were taken from us one starry night, don’t worry we know you didn’t leave with out a fight. Tonight we shed a tear, all wishing you were still here. You truly were a great guy, it sad en's me that we must say good bye. We must say goodbye for now, But we shall meet again. As for now in our hearts, is where we keep you dear friend. "Live to love or why live at all" |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was so beautiful and so sad.... ![]() |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Dean- This was so sad. ![]() It's hard to let a loved one go. You wrote about this very well. Great job. ![]() |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
Very good poem. It is hard to have a person die who you are close to... You expressed that very well. |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I know exactly how this feels x3. It's always a sad thing when a friend dies. You just gotta believe that the person is doing great now. My condolences, and great poem. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Beautiful tribute and graciously said. I applaud you not only for the poem but for the gesture you've done for this person. Keep it up. hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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cutie2005 Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 148Bennett, Colorado USA |
;( That was soooo sad!!!!! But very well written!! Thanks for sharing Always, Amanda If you love someone you would go to the end of the world for them! |
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since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Very sad topic... But a beautiful tribute to someone who was ovbiously very special to you. Thanks for sharing this.. I really enjoyed it. Nicely done. --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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