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Snooganzmeister32
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since 2001-07-17

Posts 67
Cali, USA

0 posted 2001-07-30 01:35 PM

Yes, I have been on here for a while- Just in another room...

Last Night

I sat with the one I love last night,
She sang to me an olden strain;
In former times it woke delight,
   Last night--but pain.

Last night we saw the stars arise,
But clouds soon dimmed the ether blue;
And when we sought each other's eyes
   Tears dimmed them too!

We paced along our favorite walk,
But paced in silence broken-hearted:
Of old we used to smile and talk;
   Last night--we parted.

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

1 posted 2001-07-30 02:01 PM

Oh Sarah- That was so sad....
I'm sorry about that...Heartbreak kills.
This flowed really well though, and the emotion was captured wonderfully. Can't wait to see more.

[This message has been edited by Spice (edited 07-30-2001).]

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-07-30 02:33 PM

This was really awesome. I loved this poem. So sad, so full of raw emotion. I loved it. I hope to see your work here more.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

Heavens Tears

Senior Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 677

3 posted 2001-07-30 02:50 PM

This was a very nice poem, very emotional. Thanx for the read!

Shygirl82
Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 245
Ilinois

4 posted 2001-07-30 04:00 PM

Sarah,
Very good poem here...very emotional. Heartbreak is hard and I hope things are better or at least getting there...I hope to see more of your work in here!!
~Nikki~

It takes only a minute to like someone, a hour to love someone, but a lifetime to forget them.

Snooganzmeister32
Member

since 2001-07-17

Posts 67
Cali, USA

5 posted 2001-07-30 05:26 PM

Just F.Y.I. all! That wasnt from a personal experiance!

mistic
Member

since 2001-05-06

Posts 233
Idaho, U.S.A.

6 posted 2001-07-30 06:44 PM

this is filled with lots of emotion... I liked it. thanks for sharing and keep writing

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

7 posted 2001-08-04 02:05 PM

Oh wow.. this is very sad. I really enjoyed this.. I'm glad it wasn't from personal experience, as this is a hard thing to go through. Thanks for sharing this.. nicely done!

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

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