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Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

0 posted 2001-07-30 10:51 AM

Oh when shall it come
it brings peace,tranquility
in a world of unrest
come relieve me of my burdens
for i seek peace, rest in this
world where there is no one
come I shall not fight
I have been wrong
there is nothing to fight for
I have been a lost soul
floundering in a sea of trouble
my passing will trouble none
come quickly take me away
no human will suffer for me
come make haste.

Regina Levy

If you only understood my pain then maybe you could learn to be my friend. Be there. My crying shoulder. The smiles. And the caring i need to survive.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-07-30 02:27 PM

I really liked this one!! Short and greatly done! Wow.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

2 posted 2001-07-30 09:59 PM

wow...regi this one is really great. it has sort of emotional ties for me...a few days ago my uncle took his own life. this seems how he may have felt during his lasts days on Earth. great job on this, it's going in my library. bye bye.
-fear-

i'm a penguin! i'm a penguin! i'm a cute lil penguiiiin! i'm a penguin i'm a penguin! i eat FISH!--tis the pretty penguin song

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

3 posted 2001-07-31 10:14 AM

Amongst all these poets, you still continue to shine and stand out brighter than ever. Every poem I read from you brings this connection. It's a good thing.

"I have been a lost soul
floundering in a sea of trouble" The image I got from that was mind blowing.

Thanks for the reading, Regina.

~AF~

"Reality is just a crutch for people who can't cope with drugs." -- Robin Williams

Kevin

Senior Member

since 1999-11-02

Posts 729
Torrington, Ct, Usa

4 posted 2001-07-31 01:45 PM

your passing would trouble me

this is amazing

we need all the beautiful people inside and out in this world that we can get our hands on

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

5 posted 2001-08-04 02:16 PM

Beautiful words, Regi. This poem is very.. peaceful. I liked it. The images you portray in your poetry are absolutely amazing! Beautiful work, yet again.

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

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