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Teen Poetry #5

First Love

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2002-07-28 01:31 PM

It's rare and innocent,
a once in a lifetime thing.
You never forget it,
it's always a part of you.
It's always the most crushing,
and it always hurts the most.
Hold no grudges against it,
and have no regrets.
'Cuz they'll always be with you too.

~Ultimately, we are all dead~Proximo

Chel2082
Junior Member

since 2002-07-23

Posts 40
Baltimore, MD

1 posted 2002-07-28 03:38 PM

This is a good piece and I am sure that a lot of ppl can relate. Keep up the good work.

<3 Chel

With GOD all things are possible...<3 CHEL

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

2 posted 2002-07-28 10:01 PM

thank u

~Ultimately, we are all dead~Proximo

anawnda
Member

since 2002-07-26

Posts 113

3 posted 2002-07-29 01:59 AM

oh God!!!! this reminds me of my first love, it was a roller coaster ride and what made it so significant was that it was new at that time for me. keep up the goodwork and i know some ppl can be mean on their comments but just take it as a sign to do better, dont stop. poetry is life.

anawnda

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