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Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

0 posted 2002-07-26 12:49 PM

This poem was inspired by one of my own crushes ( I know I can't spell I still need help on that :-) ) and this is basically what I felt for like a year or two. If you have any ideas for a title I would love them, I cannot think of one for this. Thank you!

hidden away in my soul
a secret kept for so long
your crystal blue eyes
looking in to mine

your laughter ringing
my heart soaring
everytime I hear you name
in my mind over and over it goes

your smile makes me smile
everytime i look into your eyes
i laugh when you laugh
but only to myself

everyone says i am falling
down an endless tunnel
as i close my eyes everynight
your name holds forth on my lips

writing about you
describing every feature
i know from a vivid picture
painted in my head

hidden away in my soul
a secret kept for so long
wanting you to laugh with me
wanting your crystal blue eyes

to get lost in mine

Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before-Edgar Allen Poe

Android 17

Senior Member

since 2001-07-21

Posts 664
Winnipeg

1 posted 2002-07-26 01:23 PM

Wow---Riley...this is amazing. As you know, I can relate...*sigh* Oh God...can I ever...

I loved how---yeah...wow! Great work Riley! You REALLY know how to reach out to people, namely me! Lol

Others are too in love with the sound of their own voice to speak the truth...

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

2 posted 2002-07-26 01:26 PM

Well thanks! I really had a hard time a couple of years back and well I had to express it somehow. Glad you could relate and like it. ( I have e-mailed you so you should be getting it ) All you can do is hope.

~*Riley*~

Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before-Edgar Allen Poe

anya
Member

since 2002-07-27

Posts 393
London, UK

3 posted 2002-07-27 12:19 PM

liked this alot, very eloquently written
anya

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