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Android 17

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since 2001-07-21

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0 posted 2002-07-26 10:16 AM

Oh jeez---I'm getting all depressed again...

Road of Love's Loss-
Down the road of Love's Loss...
Each house, filled with painful memories.
"I love you" and "We'll always be together---"
Her heartfelt promises, broken on a whim.

Paved with happiness and laughter,
The now tear soaked road, remains broken---and crushed.
Each house entered bring now hurt...
New reminders of old emotions.

As night transcends...her vioce crys,
"I hate you!", "Get away from me"
"What did I ever do?", I call back.
"All I ever did was fall in love..."

-----------------

I've made only the slightest differences to this poem...

Others are too in love with the sound of their own voice to speak the truth...

Pollita
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since 2002-07-25

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the unknown realm of insanity

1 posted 2002-07-26 10:25 AM

Omg i so feel your pain!I'm so sorry you feel this way!Just to wake up to that...Well it must be pretty devastating!From hearing any break up song when i think of someone or something makes me cry...No matter what!

Escapially if someone likes someone and the other person is already involved with another person.Or just one that makes me have memories!
Keep your chin up alex,After all...
You are so really loved now!And you are happy now!Or at least i'd like to think so!
*~*Pollita*~*

Android 17

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2 posted 2002-07-26 11:44 AM

*sigh* Thank you so much, Delaney...it's just---some days I really miss her, y'know?

Others are too in love with the sound of their own voice to speak the truth...

Pollita
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the unknown realm of insanity

3 posted 2002-07-26 12:29 PM

Ya i no how you feel...
But when you miss her just try not to think about it/her.
That might help!

Android 17

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4 posted 2002-07-26 12:56 PM

Delaney---I wish it were that easy! Ugh...I HAVE to talk to her---but, I'm not strong enough...

Others are too in love with the sound of their own voice to speak the truth...

Pollita
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the unknown realm of insanity

5 posted 2002-07-26 01:10 PM

I totally understand...
You're just not strong enough...
AS neither am i.
Thats why you can't talk with her.
And why i can't tell him.
But with some of the things i say...
Well sometimes they sound like hints.
I don't mean them to it.But they just come out.

Riley

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since 2002-07-18

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in the pouring rain

6 posted 2002-07-26 01:16 PM

I really liked this because I know what its like. I lost the guy I liked two years ago and I still can't get him out of my head. So, I really liked it. It made me think. ( surprise surprise ) It made me think, wish I would have never fallen in love, but then what would life be then?

~*Riley*~

Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before-Edgar Allen Poe

Android 17

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7 posted 2002-07-26 01:20 PM

Yeah---thanks Delaney!

And Riley---*sigh* Thanks for being so understanding...especially from someone who's felt this first hand, at least I know I'm not crazy for still having her in my head!

Thanks both Riley and Delaney! Riley if you want to mail and chat through there, mail me at "[email protected]" if you wish!

Others are too in love with the sound of their own voice to speak the truth...

Pollita
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the unknown realm of insanity

8 posted 2002-07-26 02:12 PM

your welcome.
And no your not crazy to STILL have her in your head.

Riley

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in the pouring rain

9 posted 2002-07-26 02:27 PM

your welcome, and no one is ever crazy. I still have my guy on the brain and it has been over two years. You are not crazy in the least.

~*Riley*~

Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before-Edgar Allen Poe

Android 17

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10 posted 2002-07-26 02:46 PM

Thanks guys---it really means alot to me...I just, don't know why she left me...and that's a HUGE part of it...

Others are too in love with the sound of their own voice to speak the truth...

Riley

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in the pouring rain

11 posted 2002-07-26 03:15 PM

Well trust me your gonna have her on your mind a long long time. ( e-mail me soon k ) so take it easy! :-)

~*Riley*~

Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before-Edgar Allen Poe

Android 17

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12 posted 2002-07-27 10:40 AM

*sigh* It just hurts...alot...

Others are too in love with the sound of their own voice to speak the truth...

Purple Lightning
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13 posted 2002-07-28 01:25 AM

Gotta love these three way conversations. If it hurts, then why don't you email Rhonda? You KNOW she's always there for you, whether you want her to be or not.
Good poem though. Sounds like you were pretty torn up when you wrote this.

I'm sure that many would want Elrond, but Legolas is fine for me.

Skyfire

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14 posted 2002-07-28 01:46 AM

Alex, you have my phone number...

PoetryIsLife

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since 2001-10-27

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...in my boxers...

15 posted 2002-07-28 03:15 AM

I don't Rhonda. I just realized that. Yet you have mine... *strokes chin* Hmm...

Alex... *hugs* When are you usually on MSN?

Sincerely,
Titus

"They say that a hero can save us. I'm not gonna stand here and wait..."

-Chad Kroger

Riley

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in the pouring rain

16 posted 2002-07-30 04:23 PM

well, hey again. I have caught up on this convo and I am in it. * looks very confused * ok I make no sense :-). e-mail me soon, andriod I just e-mail ya.

~*Riley*~

Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before-Edgar Allen Poe

chasing rain
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Canada

17 posted 2002-07-30 06:27 PM

Titus, you have MSN? o_O;;;

Hi Alex!

REPOST!? DARN YOU! GIMME MORE NEW STUFF! STOP THE OLD! GIVE NOUVEAU! Oh help, my rhyming sucks. o_O;;;

Anyways...I'm not gonna comment much on this other than the above cuz it's a repost!!!!!! I'm discriminant towards them. Can you tell? *halo* Hee. So sorry. But...keep it up.

-Leah-

Android 17

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18 posted 2002-07-30 07:55 PM

Purple Lightning---I'm still pretty torn up with this...

Rhonda---I don't have a phone card...

Leah---thanks for the tip

Others are too in love with the sound of their own voice to speak the truth...

Riley

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since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

19 posted 2002-07-30 08:34 PM

* loox around * am I the only one here * finds them * o there you are. Um...... are you gonna check your e-mail andriod 17? Casue I e-mailed ya. * sighs * ok I am gonna go

~*Riley*~

Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before-Edgar Allen Poe

anya
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since 2002-07-27

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20 posted 2002-07-31 08:48 AM

really loved this, so full of emotion, i love reading poetry which is obviously so heartfelt, thankyou
anya

Android 17

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21 posted 2002-07-31 01:13 PM

Heh...I'd like to think that there's more than just heart in this---it's my soul as well!

Others are too in love with the sound of their own voice to speak the truth...

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