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Pollita
Member

since 2002-07-25

Posts 220
the unknown realm of insanity

0 posted 2002-07-26 12:54 PM

You broke my heart,you made me cry.Knowing we said good bye.You were my insperation,my everything.All the good times are gone,we gave up so easily.
This is what i cry about as i sit.
Ionly cry now cuz we grown further apart...
I'll love you forever.
You'll always be there with me.
In my heart.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
I just recently wrote that one.

fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

1 posted 2002-07-26 11:07 AM

hey,
welcome to passions because i don't recall ever replying to one of your posts. this was short, but it got the message across...you portrayed this feeling relatively well. sucks major bum, aye?
-bergundy-

maybe i'll catch fire, something nice to warm me. something pure to burn away the darkness, that hides inside my mind. -alkaline trio-

Pollita
Member

since 2002-07-25

Posts 220
the unknown realm of insanity

2 posted 2002-07-26 11:29 AM

thank you i was trying to make to poem short.
And yes i am new here thanks for the welcoming i just signed up yesterday or the day before i forget...I don't get what you mean about the "sucks major bum"what exactly do you mean by that?

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