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Riley 
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain 
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secret kept deep inside hanging by a thread lingering by my lips pouring out to quickly betrayel sweeps my mind pushes my spirt down keeps in mind that I am now broken true love has never seen through my hearts empty window only breaks them why should they care secrets kept for so long broken in a single night by a kiss and a hug poured out with out doubt secrets of my life of my love of my heart stepped on by you my heart drained of its soul Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before-Edgar Allen Poe |
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Android 17
since 2001-07-21
Posts 664Winnipeg |
Wow...I liked the "storytelling imagry" in this! It got the message across...which was your main point! Hmmm---I'm glad to have stumbled upon your work here...and hope to see more of it in the future! Others are too in love with the sound of their own voice to speak the truth... |
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StellarChica Member
since 2002-07-06
Posts 207floating down a river... |
I really liked this poem! It was great! Good work!  *~erin~* "Longing for home again but home is a feeling I buried in you."-Greenwheel |
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anawnda Member
since 2002-07-26
Posts 113 |
cool poem!!!! i love it!!!!!! |
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