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Pollita
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0 posted 2002-07-25 06:15 PM


This is a poem written for one of my friends.
I think it may be the very first poem i wrote that actually counted!


-~-My Good Friend-~-

When I first met alex he was special to me .That was easy to see.
He was an aquantance an then a friend.Talking with him,thinking of all
the time i would spend.
Whenever I had a problem,wether I told him or not he was always there.
He gave me the best advice when there was something I couldn't bear.
He is one of the best friends I will ever have.
Knowing I can hardly talk to him now,makes me sad.
He was good to me,and I used to think thats the way life would be.
Everyday I miss him more.
It's weird because I never felt this way before.
He was interesting through and through.
When you talk to him ,he would only want to talk to you.
That made me happy for a while,he would always make me smile.
Why am I so upset then?
He is gone for now and I need his advice more than anything!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

© Copyright 2002 Delaniie Quirk - All Rights Reserved
*~p.r.i.n.c.e.s.s.~*
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1 posted 2002-07-25 06:56 PM


hey sweethart, thanx for the note. i think you should tell this alex how you feel, i mean if you can. i dunno the situation and i don't want to pry, but i hope it all works out for you! luv alwayz & forever: britt
Pollita
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2 posted 2002-07-25 07:41 PM


Britt your sooo sweet!I think i just made a new friend.right?Do you like the poem?Be honest please and you should check out the other 2 i wrote!And don't be silly!

Of course you are not prying in.But what do you mean tell him how i feel.Please do explain.

Delaney~

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3 posted 2002-07-26 12:05 PM


Well Britt...I think that Delaney SHOULD tell this Alex what she means. Even if it doens't make sense to her---and no matter how it comes out...from what I've heard, he'll understand!

And as for the poem---I remember this one well! I can actually reach into my drawer and grab it...but yes, it was more a recap! Thanks Delaney!

Others are too in love with the sound of their own voice to speak the truth...

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4 posted 2002-07-26 12:54 PM


*sings* I like it,I like it... Great job!
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