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will i be empty anymore
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will i be empty anymore |
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Deep_Inside Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 377i can't stop hiding |
this is for you you know what you lose every time is happens and you start to look at the good and the bad but you find the right decishion, and it hurts just to know it becomes every though,t and covers the hole of life blinding you to see nonthing, and still have to make a decshion the other side not mattering, you sit in indecshion hiting you from the inside, and all of what you left behind comes rushing back to you, trying to deal once more you get one more glims of what was and trying cope with what you remember you say the felings were empty, and nothing was worth it any more but running away and changing everything you know your the furthest away your alone agian in a lost wourld all your own the trust is all gone, you can't even trust yourself but somewhere deep inside that you've let out once befor you hope that nothing will be empty any more sory bout the speling it's hard for me when you live you die when you die your forgotten when your forgotten you truly die [This message has been edited by Deep_Inside (07-25-2002 01:48 PM).] |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Nice poem. Lot of spelling errors..unless they are purposely misspelled. Ronil (A mask for everyday. Imagine a life without them.) |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
I know a lot of horrible spellers that are really cool people, so no worries. This was a very expressive piece and I could tell it needed to be written...don't stop doing that.  ~Carly "Feelings are not supposed to be logical. Dangerous is the man who has rationalized his emotions." |
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