Teen Poetry #5 |
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were you scared? |
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shadowchild458 Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 117MN,USA |
were you scared when he came? when he crept through the halls and he opened the door and when his horny little fingers wrapped around your wrist? did you ever scream when he tried to touch you when he held you at gunpoint when he whispered in your ears you are beautiful and then he shut the blinds did you know what was happening? When he tore at your clothes when he made you feel useless when he dirtied you wnd then left you bloody on the floor you didn’t call anyone you simply went to sleep the tears wet your pillow you didn’t want to live why didn’t he kill you? were you scared for the people who he’d done this to before he told you, you were pretty wnd then he hurt you he left the scars as souvenirs a beautiful gift he said he was never gentle but you were mute you couldn’t move couldn’t fight he would kill you and then what? but now you wished you had fought and then you wish he’d killed you were you scared when he came? when he crept through the halls and he opened the door and when his horny little fingers wrapped around your wrist? did you ever scream when he touched you? or did you just lay there wishing you were dead life may just take a while but i guess heaven's worth the wait |
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StellarChica Member
since 2002-07-06
Posts 207floating down a river... |
Wow. That was really powerful..I liked it alot. Very nice. Good work! |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
hey, i hope this isn't a poem from personal expeirence..if it is you should probably get some help. this was well written...it was very disturbing, the subject of rape always is. i don't know what else to say...i just hope it didn't happen to you. -bergundy- maybe i'll catch fire, something nice to warm me. something pure to burn away the darkness, that hides inside my mind. -alkaline trio- |
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shadowchild458 Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 117MN,USA |
no i wasn't writing about expirience but more the flashes of fear from the people i know. it's kinda hard to explain. thanks for the comments though! life may just take a while but i guess heaven's worth the wait |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
i guess i was wrong.. i didn't think you'd posted this but i guess you did. I didn't mind reading it again. ![]() ![]() [This message has been edited by PoeticGoddessOfDepression (07-25-2002 08:12 PM).] |
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