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shadowchild458
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since 2002-07-10
Posts 117
MN,USA

0 posted 2002-07-22 11:56 PM


were you scared when he came?
when he crept through the halls
and he opened the door
and when his horny little fingers
wrapped around your wrist?
did you ever scream
when he tried to touch you
when he held you at gunpoint
when he whispered in your ears
you are beautiful
and then he shut the blinds
did you know what was happening?
When he tore at your clothes
when he made you feel useless
when he dirtied you
wnd then left you bloody on the floor
you didn’t call anyone
you simply went to sleep
the tears wet your pillow
you didn’t want to live
why didn’t he kill you?
were you scared
for the people
who he’d done this to before
he told you, you were pretty
wnd then he hurt you
he left the scars as souvenirs
a beautiful gift he said
he was never gentle
but you were mute
you couldn’t move
couldn’t fight
he would kill you
and then what?
but now you wished you had
fought and then you wish
he’d killed you
were you scared when he came?
when he crept through the halls
and he opened the door
and when his horny little fingers
wrapped around your wrist?
did you ever scream
when he touched you?
or did you just lay there
wishing you were dead

life may just take a while but i guess heaven's worth the wait

AKJ

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StellarChica
Member
since 2002-07-06
Posts 207
floating down a river...
1 posted 2002-07-23 12:36 PM


Wow. That was really powerful..I liked it alot. Very nice. Good work!
fearing-laughter
Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)
2 posted 2002-07-23 01:33 AM


hey,
i hope this isn't a poem from personal expeirence..if it is you should probably get some help.  this was well written...it was very disturbing, the subject of rape always is.  i don't know what else to say...i just hope it didn't happen to you.  
-bergundy-

maybe i'll catch fire, something nice to warm me. something pure to burn away the darkness, that hides inside my mind. -alkaline trio-

shadowchild458
Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 117
MN,USA
3 posted 2002-07-23 12:02 PM


no i wasn't writing about expirience but more the flashes of fear from the people i know. it's kinda hard to explain. thanks for the comments though!

life may just take a while but i guess heaven's worth the wait

AKJ

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439
I am everywhere
4 posted 2002-07-25 08:07 PM


i guess i was wrong..
i didn't think you'd posted this but i guess you did.
I didn't mind reading it again.
       (this guy is cool)

[This message has been edited by PoeticGoddessOfDepression (07-25-2002 08:12 PM).]

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