»
Archives
»
Teen Poetry #5
»
Late Summer
| Teen Poetry #5 |
|
Late Summer |
|
|
StellarChica Member
since 2002-07-06
Posts 207floating down a river... |
Another late summer evening, With all the prerequisites of a storm, For the third night in a row, The clouds grow dark, The air becomes damp, A heavy wind begins to blow. Another late summer romance, With all the prerequisites of disaster, For the third night in a row, We lie in the darkness, Whispering of our premature goodbyes, Knowing that come fall we'll have to let go. Another late summer evening, With all the prerequisites of a storm, For the third night in a row, I sit in the dark, Waiting for the rain, To wash away the world I know. I'm beginning to like the rhyming thing. I never liked it too much but it gives poems a nice flow...Ok that's enough from me  *~erin~* "From the start it was shaky and the characters rash, a nice setting for heartache where emotion comes last."-Yellowcard |
||
| © Copyright 2002 Erin Reynolds - All Rights Reserved | |||
Riley 
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
I liked it to. I really like how you said the first line over and over but changing it each time to another thing, and I just thought that gave it something else. I like it. Hope to read more soon. ~*Riley*~ Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before-Edgar Allen Poe |
||
|
Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Very beautiful poem. I like your style. Great work. Keep it up. Ronil (A mask for everyday. Imagine a life without them.) |
||
|
Cinderelly Member
since 2001-12-31
Posts 189NM, USA |
This is a great poem!  Life is a moderately good play w/ a badly written thrid act. - Unknown |
||
|
StellarChica Member
since 2002-07-06
Posts 207floating down a river... |
Thanks for all the compliments . I'm glad you enjoyed it.*~erin~* |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
