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Two Nations |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
Lands of paint, spilled across enemy lines Sheared glass trickles up along the curvy plains Teargas creaks in and out of stoned barriers Gunfire sprays the murky skies with a distinct taste of cowardly cry Suicide bombers bursting with pride Soldiers peel off moving buses Wads of blood scattered with an eerie ache Families cry tears of shelled pain Propaganda, a cancer without a cure Morals slowly descend into the Dead Sea Feathers of scared shrills scatter the infinite clouds God’s wings a shadow of betrayal Trains of poetic peace speed through beads of blood Eyes are forever bloodshot Pillars in shambles, crumbs for all those lost |
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Jenabou Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA |
This is a very powerfull piece. You've really conveyed all the emotions of this terrible time. Good write. ~Jennifer Nicole Boutilier~ *for someone who's used to heartache,losing it all was just a matter of time* |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Nice poem. I think it should have been posted in Dark Passions. Ronil (A mask for everyday. Imagine a life without them.) |
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