Teen Poetry #5 |
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when i look at you |
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fairy girl Junior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 10*~*Virginia*~* |
this isn't one of my best, just a quick first post, more to come. tell me what ya think, thanks. bye. when i look at you when i look at you i see all that i need i see all that i want and all that i need to be when i look at you i see love in your eyes that love is for me, i smile and sigh when i look at you i see what i've been looking for who knows what the future has in store when i look at you theres nothing else i can do but sit here and look at you |
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anonymous albert ?![]()
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!! this hit ME home!...wow...i relate to this...this is exactly what i feel these days...so much is behind this poem...you did well on expressing it ![]() [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 07-14-2001).] |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
![]() ![]() You did a terrific job expressiong your feelings. I liked this. I hope to see more form you in the future. ![]() |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
Welcome To Passions! Hope ya enjoy your time here. The poem was very good, I thought that it was a great first post, and I hope that you keep posting your work here. - Cody - |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
![]() ![]() you said that you have more in store well judging by this one i cant wait to have a read!!!...this is a sweet first post-it put a smile on my face ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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lil_pwheeler Junior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 39here |
Hey welcome home. Thats a great starter. Can't wait for more work. good job. |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!! Great first post and im definately gonna hold you to that promise of more being in store. Good job and i cant wait to see more from you so keep em coming! |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
![]() ![]() It's a nice first post you have shared with us all. Thank you for putting it up for all of us to see. I look forward to your many more replies and posts with us in the future. ~AF~ Psychopathic chickens are plotting against me... |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Welcome to pipTalk!! This is a very well written poem... shows desperation to me. I loved the ending. I really enjoyed it, and I look forward to seeing more of your replies and posts around here ![]() --Marie You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds. |
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Heavens Tears![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
Welcome to Passions Fairy Girl! I truly enjoyed your first post. We all look forward to seeing more of your work and replies. (Please check your email for a special greeting) HeavensTears~Moderator/Passions in Poetry |
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Hill's_Chatabox Junior Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 46USA |
![]() ![]() Good first post can't wait to read more... ~Hillary~ Shoot for the moon cause if you miss you'll still end up in the *stars*!!! |
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Angel Bee Member
since 2001-01-30
Posts 176Virginia |
Welcome to Passions! Good first post, keep writing. ab *~"Sometimes I wish I was a little girl again--because bruised knees heal faster than broken hearts."~* |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great job on this one. i felt it hit home for me. Nicely written. Welcome to passions! I hope you enjoy it here as much as we all do. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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allie Member
since 2001-07-09
Posts 218Australia |
nice post, WELCOME, im new too! Good work with the poem, nice that you found someone to love so much. ALLIE |
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Starnite Junior Member
since 2001-07-05
Posts 41Wisconsin |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!! That was a great 1st post. I hope to read more of them **Sarah ![]() |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!!! hope you like it here as much as we all do. it's a wonderful place with friends who are like family. ![]() great first post too. short and sweet. I loves it ![]() I LOVE ZU, hey Albie, Cody, Allan, Carly, Cherish, Lizzy, Kris, *HUGS JAVI*, Tamma, Acire, and Branden. |
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