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Change the Season
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Change the Season |
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
Each period in life is a season people come and go for a reason childhood days are carefree and fun but sooner that later those days are done Change the season Adolesence a period of confusion and joy will you ask that girl out or remain the shy boy will you fit in with the so called in crowd or will you stand alone and still stand proud Change the season Adulthood 18 years of age you're out of your childhood cage learning new freedoms and responsibility learning to experience some flexability Change the season Turning 20 in a matter of days guess I have to remove childhood ways can no longer use the teenager excuse for everytime responsibility I abuse change the season well um yeah no longer a teenager in like 3 weeks it's a really wierd feeling I think I'm starting to feel old oh God no lol but yeah. I'm not asking U 2 luv me I'm just letting out the truth no hold barred about what I feel nothing wrong with what I say |
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Wood_Stock Member
since 2001-05-09
Posts 58The little yellow |
Well I'm just coming up 18, so I guess I've got a few more seasons to change... Though, I really like this one. It was clever! A pleasent change and a nice reflection. I won't tell you to keep posting, because I'm sure you will anyway... heh heh. I feel inspired. Wood_Stock. |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Hey Rescue- I really liked this. I get what you're saying. I think people of all ages will be able to relate. Kids turning into teenagers, teens to adults, adults to parents... and so on. Nice read.  |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
LOL, feeling old already? Wait until you're 40, or soemthing like that!  This is a very well written poem. It reminded me of a Bible verse in ecclesiasties saying, "For every time there is a season, and a purpose for all things under Heaven." Nicely done! I enjoyed this. And happy early birthday  --Marie You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I didn't know you were almost 20. That's new to me..... Anyhow, I'm just heading off to college and I know how it feels to be letting go of that carefree childhood life. Oh well, it's just another stepping stone. Well done here.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
This was a great poem. I can relatew to it very well. I am only 16 but soon I wil have the troubles of university and things so I totally understand what you are saying. Very well written, keep writing!   ^*~Kicking Kim~*^ "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
your perception of reality and things you must acknowledgment was awesome...i can learn more and think about this EVEN more...great job on expressing this...had much truth. [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 07-07-2001).] |
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Marshalzu 
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Great work TR I really enjoyed the read I know how you feel about getting old, I realised the other day it was about time I acted my age and all of a sudden I felt ancient... anyway Keep on Sharing Zu |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
Great job! The repition was great. Most of the time I do not like repititions like this, but this had a great effect. *Amanda* |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This is very well written. I'm impressed with this one. Thanks for sharing. hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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mistic Member
since 2001-05-06
Posts 233Idaho, U.S.A. |
This was really well written good job |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
wowza!!!! how did I miss this one??? I love this poem hun!! made me think......although I'm not really that old. just 16. still, it's nice to think everyonce in awhile...ya knwo well, anyway, the poem was awesome... I LOVE ZU, hey Albie, Cody, Allan, Carly, Cherish, Lizzy, Kris, *HUGS JAVI*, Tamma, Acire, and Branden. |
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