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Riley 
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain 
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sun rays wash upon my face crystal skies open the heavens velvet grass emerald green rubs so softly against my cheek wide open fields dotted with plants flowers surrond me sweet smells flood my soul close my eyes breathe in the peace precious moments go on forever |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
I love your imaginary that you use in the poem. Good job. Ronil (A mask for everyday. Imagine a life without them.) |
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Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
Thank you very much!!!! ~*Riley*~ |
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Chel2082 Junior Member
since 2002-07-23
Posts 40Baltimore, MD |
Very cute piece..nice use of imagery. Keep it up. <3 Chel With GOD all things are possible...<3 CHEL |
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Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
thank you very much chel!!!!! ~*Riley*~ Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before. |
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StellarChica Member
since 2002-07-06
Posts 207floating down a river... |
Hey, great poem! Excellent use of imagery. Keep up the good work!  "From the start it was shaky and the characters rash, a nice setting for heartache where emotion comes last."-Yellowcard [This message has been edited by StellarChica (07-24-2002 07:20 PM).] |
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Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
Thank you for your comment stella!!!! Hope to read some of your stuff. ~*Riley*~ Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before-Edgar Allen Poe |
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