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fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

0 posted 2002-07-23 05:45 AM

i don't trust you
i never will
so put those lies away
get away from me
this isn't a game
you blinded me once
it won't happen again
you want forgiveness?
beg for it
and maybe if i'm bored enough
i'll pretend it was granted
pretend that i care
because you've ruined
your chances with me
and all i want
is to see you bleed
crying in shame
it may seem petty
but you deserve
ever bitter word
uttered in dismay
and every hateful look
sent your way
you tried to crush me
but you only managed
to make me angry
and ashamed that i fell for it once again
but you might as well give up
because haven't you ever heard?
hell hath no fury
like a woman spurned

eh so i think the quote might be "hell hath no fury like a woman scorned" but oh well. *laughing* i like spurned!

-bergundy-

maybe i'll catch fire, something nice to warm me. something pure to burn away the darkness, that hides inside my mind. -alkaline trio-

Dark Enchantress
Senior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

1 posted 2002-07-23 07:47 AM

I like it. It's hard to write about anger for me, but its a human emotion that I am quite infatuated with so I like at least to read about it. Do you like to break things too? lol

"if you know me so well then tell me which hand do I use?" Tori Amos

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

2 posted 2002-07-23 11:51 AM

great poem. You expressed your emotions quite well.

Ronil (A mask for everyday. Imagine a life without them.)

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

3 posted 2002-07-23 04:32 PM

i like this, theres been times when i feel like this 2, and like Dark Enchantress sed, lol do u like 2 break things 2? good write

~In the end..it doesn't even matter...~LP

fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

4 posted 2002-07-23 08:55 PM

hey all,
thanks for replying to this, it is kind of psycho. i just got to thinking how i've allowed so many guys to screw me over, and instead of being depressed i got very pissed off lol. it felt really good to get this out though, and now that i re-read it, it's pretty decent. *laughing* when i get this angry, i don't break general objects, i attempt to break people. thanks again for replying! twas cooly.
-bergundy-

maybe i'll catch fire, something nice to warm me. something pure to burn away the darkness, that hides inside my mind. -alkaline trio-

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