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quietlydying

Senior Member

since 2001-06-10

Posts 935
the wonderful land of oz

0 posted 2002-07-20 01:22 AM

A self-proclaimed
literary junky,
you’ve memorized
the back
of the shampoo bottle
just
because

there’s nothing
else

to Read in the shower.

/jen/

so foul and fair a day i have not seen. - macbeth act 1, scene 3

ericaisamonkey
Member

since 2002-04-04

Posts 51
A little town north of nowhere

1 posted 2002-07-20 03:12 AM

lmfao. nice job. egotism exactly. lol.

*Erica* :loveya:

Rick
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

2 posted 2002-07-20 07:04 AM

Enjoyed the read, you must relax some time and read the back of the conditioner bottle ( What you think )?
Keep reading and enjoying it.

Sincerely
Rick

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

3 posted 2002-07-20 08:22 AM

ARGH! this poem exposes me..how do you know that i do that while showering??

enjoyed the sly humour here..

clve527
Member

since 2002-07-08

Posts 200

4 posted 2002-07-20 09:39 AM

I actually like this, it's put together well. But I wonder why you removed only else in a more freestyle format. It's not a big deal, but it does stick out a little bit. But I guess that is a matter of a poet's preference. Nice job.

Casey

P.S. I much prefer my Shaving gel can, it's much more interesting.

If all you want is emotion, go down to walmart, buy yourself a diary and hide it in a drawer where no one can see...

LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

5 posted 2002-07-20 05:05 PM

It gets boring in there!

devil_tongue
Member

since 2000-03-02

Posts 50

6 posted 2002-07-21 07:01 AM

Oooo Jen, you never cease to amaze me. It's so simple yet creates such an amazing effect. I always did adore your work. I'll email you in a little while to see how you're going.

An old friend.

Dark Enchantress
Senior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

7 posted 2002-07-21 09:31 PM

I'm such a loser. I only dance in the shower.

I really like the way you describe things in interesting and creative ways. It always makes poems 10 times more enjoyable (or tolerable even) when a poet tries to "juice it up" a bit.

"if you know me so well then tell me which hand do I use?" Tori Amos

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