Teen Poetry #5 |
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Emotion |
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lily drop New Member
since 2002-07-13
Posts 3 |
My tears fall in silence, as the pain rushes through My heart burns the pain as the anger rises up My throat feels the anger as the hurtfulness lands hard My stomach fills with the hurtfulness as the sorrow settles in The sorrowness spills out as the long day comes to an end |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Enjoyed your write of real emotions and I know that aching pain. Nicely done~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions, lilydrop...you've done a good job with the writing of an ache that so many have felt in their lifetime...I am looking forward to seeing more from you... Karilea |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Enjoyed this first read of yours, sounds like you have found grief which in part catches us all off guard, it can be cruel, but as they say, time heals all. Never stop seeking the goal of happiness. Sincerely Rick |
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