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Loosing It
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Loosing It |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden 
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I'm freezing and crazy the space bar hates me and I feel like my head is about to burst. You confuse me your actions do not- I repeat- DO NOT match your words at all and you you make me warm you make me happy make me want to surrender my corner and give up because when I'm with you I'm convinced I'm loosing it. I've never seen you on the streets of this town, I've never seen you just hanging around, But you still tell me that you know me... ~Justin Sane |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
Wow... blow me away. Very cool. I like the repetition part, and the end is great.  |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Thanks Kielo, I value your opinion and that makes me happy that you liked it... I've never seen you on the streets of this town, I've never seen you just hanging around, But you still tell me that you know me... ~Justin Sane |
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