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Teen Poetry #5

A Simple Ray

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

0 posted 2002-07-18 09:15 PM

Looking up
A ray of light
Hits my face
Floods my soul
Smiles dance
In my eyes
It beams down
Keeps me safe
I sigh
Life is perfect
For the moment
Time
Stands still
My arms rise
To the sky
Open up
Expect something
But I get
All the joy
From that light
Beam on me
Can’t get me
Down
To perfect
To perfect

jave
Junior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 18
CO, USA

1 posted 2002-07-19 12:54 PM

nice. It's moments like that that keep us alive.

thanks for sharing

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2002-07-20 07:23 AM

Yes...the only thing that should come down from this poem is the feeling of being lifted up...an excellent first entry into your new world of poetic family and friends...

Welcome to Passions!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2002-07-20 10:55 AM

Riley~

This is a lovely piece of writing~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

4 posted 2002-07-20 04:47 PM

Welcome to the family! I love the hope in your poem. Sometimes the simplest things are the best!

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