Teen Poetry #5 |
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not that it matters |
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Ynotwrite New Member
since 2002-07-15
Posts 1 |
Not that it matters but I still love you, And deep down I know that you love me too. soon You'll find the error of your ways, And I won't be happy until that day. Not that it matters but i still need you, Beside me in the cold, bitter nights. I know your cold by yourself too, So come home and make it right. Not that it matters but i still think of you, when I'm lying around alone. I can only hope that you think of me too. so someday you'll come back home. Not that it matters but i would do anything to get you back in my arms. Well almost anything anyways unless it brings you harm. |
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paladin![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
Love always matters.Welcome to Passions. paladin |
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allie Member
since 2001-07-09
Posts 218Australia |
Hmm... nice write, Last post is right: love always matters Especially to a poet ![]() However, about the poem really liked the way you started each part with "not that it matters"... simplifying emotions and then explaining them in depth, shows an unintentional contrast? That's what i think anyways! Welcome Allie |
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Auguste![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
A nice entrance! Welcome to Passions and please look in your e-mail for a special greeting. |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Unfortunately sometimes it doesn't matter and you just have to do your best to move. However, I think that if you truly believe in something you shouldn't just give up on it. Such is life.. Welcome to PIP. I also liked the repitition in the poem. Lovely. "if you know me so well then tell me which hand do I use?" Tori Amos |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
![]() *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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