Teen Poetry #5 |
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munchkins New Member
since 2002-07-04
Posts 5 |
Artificial Intelligence Never understood maths; trigonometry, geometry, it all makes no sense to me. C=5(ab)-7y I thought C was equal to chocolate or crisps? I know though that C doesn’t stand for consolidation, or completing the square. But I’ve found a way to make it seem, that I do more than just daydream, ARTIFICIAL INTELLIGENCE With my glasses on, I can pretend to be, A girl heading for a mathematical degree. Functions, graphs and probability, will now make perfect sense to me. But as I stuff them in my bag, I slowly drift away. into my land of giggles, until another day. can anybody out there tell me honestly what u think of this poem...i created it in maths as i prefer english anyway!!! |
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Match Member
since 2002-07-01
Posts 286Canada Edmonton |
its good im on the run thats all I can say ![]() Do I dare to look at whats really there, |
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Demonic Illusion Member
since 2002-02-07
Posts 50 |
that was interesting Madness is the gift that has been given to me....Mercyless Fate |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I've always loved math I always gave it an open mind, thats why C is just a variable, don't think more of it thanks for sharing là où est mon amour? |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
I hate math so I really didn't want to read this. But I did give it a chance and I actually enjoyed it. I'm an artsy kind of person. English is more my thing as well. Welcome to PIP. "if you know me so well then tell me which hand do I use?" Tori Amos |
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Auguste![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Math was always my worst subject and your poem illustrates exactly why, because even all these years later I'm still trying to figure out why I need to know all that stuff. ![]() |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
![]() *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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clve527 Member
since 2002-07-08
Posts 200 |
You asked, so here is what I think. If you are going to use punctuation, use it correctly. It does no benefit to you or the reader to have random commas and periods through out your 'poem'. Casey Some editors are failed writers, but so are most writers. |
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