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Allysa
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In an upside-down garden

0 posted 2002-07-10 07:12 PM


Lying in bed
my head in my hands
same old song on the CD player
echoing in my mind
hugging a pillow
thinking of you
thinking of you
thinking of you
I miss you next to me
miss the way you talk to me
miss the way you touch me
miss your smile
I miss you.
Crying in bed
my hair in my hands
your song on the CD player
echoing in my mind
hugging a dream
thinking of you
thinking of you
thinking of you
I miss you by my side
miss the way you comfort me
miss the way you warm me when I'm cold
miss your body
I miss you.
Dying in bed
my life in my hands
our story on the CD player
echoing in my mind
hugging a memory
thinking of you
thinking of you
thinking of you
I miss you in my arms
miss the way you hug me back
miss the way you soothe me
miss you completely
I miss you.

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LilTai
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 189
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1 posted 2002-07-10 08:33 PM


I like this...it really hits home tonight, I know EXACTLY how you are feeling.. ..sucks huh? I hope you feel better ...and really nice job, I like it a lot

   Tai

I'm an idealist..I don't know where I'm going, but I'm on my way =)

Jenabou
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since 2000-06-13
Posts 215
Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA
2 posted 2002-07-10 09:38 PM


It's like you opened the cover of the story of my heart and wrote down every page.
I know how horrible this is.I feel it everyday. Stay strong. What's meant to be will always find a way.
I love this.

~Jennifer Nicole Boutilier

*for someone who's used to heartache,losing it all was just a matter of time*
Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle

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