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Teen Poetry #5

Scatterd thoughts

Match
Member

since 2002-07-01

Posts 286
Canada Edmonton

0 posted 2002-07-01 05:13 PM

To youths go down to the beach,
To see the limits they can reach.
He tastes her tounge,
She backs away,
Feeling his lundge.
He tatters her clothes,
Her tear stained face,
Her heart filled with pain.
Can he even remember her name ?
Was she just one of his -----?
He slept with for his rank?
She hates him for it,
He can't remember,
He takes a new one there each week .
Just scattered thoughts.

Do I dare to look at whats really there,
Will I be burned?
I cant see past all the pain and tortiure that goes on in the places we call,
home.
azi

[This message has been edited by Match (07-03-2002 07:59 PM).]

sillywilly
Junior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 33
oklahoma

1 posted 2002-07-01 10:53 PM

wow, this poem is really deep. its almost scary. these aren't really scattered thoughts are they? be real. expect nothing but the best for you. i like it.

Match
Member

since 2002-07-01

Posts 286
Canada Edmonton

2 posted 2002-07-02 10:38 PM

no i guess there not scattred thoughts , they are pretty much true for me

Do I dare to look at whats really there,
Will I be burned?
I cant see past all the pain and torture that goes on in the places we call,
home.
~Azi

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

3 posted 2002-07-03 05:02 AM

this is a good poem however some of the wording is not suitable so please fix it so the poem does not have to be closed

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