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Teen Poetry #5

one day

sillywilly
Junior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 33
oklahoma

0 posted 2002-07-01 10:16 AM

The day has come
When I am free
From all the past
Has done to me.
Future forgive me
for wasting precious time
The past had a hold of me
And the present didn't mind.

LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

1 posted 2002-07-01 11:48 AM

Beautiful and true

SavingGrace
Junior Member

since 2002-05-31

Posts 26
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2 posted 2002-07-01 10:25 PM

short, simple, and oh so sweet. beautifully writen. great thing for everyone to do, let go of the past and live in the future. simple thing to say, hardest thing to do. great write!!!

~*Grace*~
You wouldn't be so concerned with what people thought of you if you only knew how seldom they did...

CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

3 posted 2002-07-02 11:56 AM

Gotta love the short sweet poems... Nice and simple, yet they don't explain everything, which I enjoy, cause you are able to expand what you see in the poem... I enjoyed this. Nice write.

      - Cody -

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LisaLongLegs
New Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 8

4 posted 2002-07-02 02:29 PM

I like it - short and sweet, but to the point. Very effective.

Deep_Inside
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since 2002-02-14

Posts 377
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