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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
As shadows, sleek and mild mannered, watched with silent eyes I wished to know how one could dream upon the starlight strewn Across the wild canopy of prairie, midnight skies. The loon glides slowly down the stream and croons a forlorn tune That basks within the stale air, and silenced all the world. I sat and listened, staring up, and wondered what to do If all the clouds came raining down, in silver, whispy swirls. The golden fields of harvest wheat reflect a blue tinged light And wavers slightly in the air, then flickers, limps, and sighs I sought to gain this prairie flame that lit my path at night As shadows, sleek and mild mannered, watched with silent eyes. * * * * * Still not happy yet. *grump* Next time, I will try freeverse... Leah |
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Who iis she Junior Member
since 2002-05-14
Posts 41Some where over the rainbow |
This poem was good i didnt take the time to really understand the message its early i dont wnat to think right now.Good poem the words go good together. If history has taught us one true thing is that no Species can last forever... |
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punkrockerrobin 
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
my leah that was a great poem i really liked it! |
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