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More Than What You See
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More Than What You See |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
Broken heart, so much pain. Tears fallen, like springtime rain. Want to leave, nowhere to go. So I walked, where rivers don't flow. Dry deserts, just like my heart. When you left, it tore me apart. I'm so lost, Nothing to do. I'm alone, without you. How could you, just pick up and go? What you think is, different from what you know. You thought, you knew me. But there's more, than what you see. All the tears, and sleepless nights. I'd lay down, shut off the lights. And think of you, of what we couldn't be. 'Cuz like I said, there's more, than just what you see. ~i kept the right ones out and let the wrong ones in~ Aerosmith~ [This message has been edited by Spine Grinder (06-30-2002 07:19 PM).] |
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Who iis she Junior Member
since 2002-05-14
Posts 41Some where over the rainbow |
This poem was so good and so true, i liked it alot thanks for the good read. If history has taught us one true thing is that no Species can last forever... |
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Punk Angel Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 66Pennsylvania, US |
hey this is a pretty good one, i like it alot! can i put it in my profile with the others? jw. luv ya gurlie~krista |
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punkrockerrobin 
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
that was a great poem i really liked it! |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
thanks 4 the replies! ~i kept the right ones out and let the wrong ones in~ Aerosmith~ |
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