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Spine Grinder
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Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2002-06-28 01:12 PM



I know i shouldn't,
give you another chance,
but i can't help myself.
i know i shouldn't,
forgive you for what you did,
but i can't help myself.
I know you'll prolly hurt me again,
but without you in my life,
my heart feels incomplete.
When You left,
I felt something die in me,
and now all this is happening again,
and i don't know what to do..
My friends tell me,
not to make the same mistake again,
but i miss you so much.
I miss your smile,
I miss your laugh,
and most of all,
I miss the way you would hold me...
What's gonna happen now?.....
It's your move.

~i kept the right ones out and let the wrong ones in~ Aerosmith~

© Copyright 2002 Staci Weidner - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-06-30 06:41 AM


people deserve second chances but then agian some don't. nice read tks for sharin

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Dark Enchantress
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2 posted 2002-06-30 11:23 AM


Unfortunately no one comes with a warning label or else we could steer clear of the people who are going to just end up hurting us. You just have to listen to your head in situations like this. Your heart, although true, may be leading you to a relationship that is not right for you. You know yourself and your lover better than anyone else though so only you can decide. Just don't let pain (no matter how great) keep you from doing what's right. Sometimes it just works out this way...

Oh well. Enough of my rambling.

I liked the poem. It was very clear and to the point. Honest and probably a situation we've all found ourselves in at least once.


[Jaime]

"I think I would like to call myself 'the girl who wanted to be God'." Sylvia Plath

[This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (06-30-2002 11:23 AM).]

Punk Angel
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since 2001-07-25
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3 posted 2002-07-01 08:40 PM


hey staci, this is a good poem, but im NOT gonna say wut i wanna say about dustin, becoz im gonna pretend it aint about him. u already kno, so im gonna su now!! lol ok bye bye~luv kris
Spine Grinder
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Standing In Silence...
4 posted 2002-07-03 11:57 AM


thanks 4 the replies, and kris, i know ur rite about him but...we cant help who we luv......

~i kept the right ones out and let the wrong ones in~ Aerosmith~

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