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Burning Fire
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Burning Fire |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
Emotions running on an escalator Eyes full of despair An empty tank, without a drop of hope My body wants to come to a halt Momentarily coming to a stop Panic pierces my skin with an icing sound Ttssssss……… Oxygen no longer a luxury The scent of death creeping on the edge of hair tips Starting to inhale a lost connection Fingers tremble as they wobble towards my face My eyes pass through the curtains of death My Grandfather is dead My heart shudders Death has taken me without notice Relinquish my pain I am forever abandoned |
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mistic Member
since 2001-05-06
Posts 233Idaho, U.S.A. |
this is really really good. i really liked it. the imagery and the emotion really stood out to me. amesome choice of words... keep writing and sharing |
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