Teen Poetry #5 |
Kisses of Novocaine |
ericaisamonkey Member
since 2002-04-04
Posts 51A little town north of nowhere |
Kisses of Novocaine Your lips Are like novocaine A temporary paralysis I cry silent The tears have no meaning To you To me they're a relief A suppression of all the anger And hurt Throwing it deep into my soul Hiding it Your touch Is like hot coals Burning my body Trying to love While being hated Is quite the chase Kiss my lips Burn my flesh I can't feel it anymore The pain from my broken heart Sends a quiet chill Down my spine Within seconds It's over and done The numbness consumes me Nothing left to say About your kisses of novocaine. *Erica* |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
This was really well done. I don't remember reading much from you- now maybe I'll make a point of it. Nice job on this Jenn Why is it that we are at our most ingenius only when trying to destroy the things that keep us alive and thriving? |
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ShortSexyAngelOnEarth Junior Member
since 2001-12-24
Posts 36im a louisiana cajun princess! lol |
this is really well written. its not really my type of poetry, but it has good rythem and balance. all in all, good job! Maryn |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
I liked this one. It has a lot of emotion in it. Interesting write, but I really enjoyed it. Thanks for posting. Nice job, Erica. - Cody - |
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songsoftheaftermath Member
since 2002-06-19
Posts 84a world of disarray |
this is really good. i enjoyed it a lot. my best friend was my drug...but a different kind ....this one's great- i can relate to it heaps. could the darkness be my friend? |
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ericaisamonkey Member
since 2002-04-04
Posts 51A little town north of nowhere |
This is one of my more recent poems. I wrote this about a guy that i had fallen for, but was a really good friend of my brothers. Hey, in the end things worked out okay. hehe Thanks for the comments, i really do appreciate it. *Erica* |
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