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LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

0 posted 2002-06-14 12:48 PM

Ok, this poem has done its job, and although it was controversial, I found out what I needed to find out...

Say what you will, my "friend"
I know that rumors die
Whisper all you want, dear "friend"
I know its all a lie

Believe what you will, my "friend"
But don’t try to comprehend
Give all the looks you can, dear "friend"
I know it’s all pretend

Stab me in the back, my "friend"
It doesn’t hurt to bleed
Leave me in the dark, dear "friend"
Ignore me when I plead

My soul is in your clutch, my "friend"
Be patient with my pain
Don’t look into my eyes, dear "friend"
They reflect yours of vain

Please don’t feign a heart, my "friend"
I see through your deceptions
You are nothing to me, dear "friend"
But a realized misconception

[This message has been edited by LCBS (06-14-2002 03:06 PM).]

cutiepiesugarbabie
Member

since 2002-06-07

Posts 110
A Cloud In the Sky

1 posted 2002-06-14 09:13 AM

wow good poem
a little harsh
it's hard to loose friends i've been there...but there's no need to keep fighting..and if she reads them why make the sitution worse by saying soemthing like that?

Acies

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

2 posted 2002-06-14 09:38 AM

First of all, I don't understand why you would even call this person a friend, unless you are saying it in a sarcastic way. Secondly, if you feel this person has hurt you or stabbed you in the back, it is fine to let things out, but don't go down to this person's level. You can tell this person how you feel, but letting in be known in public I believe is not appropriate at all.

Back on the poem though, i believe it to be well written. Thanks for sharing.

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.

[This message has been edited by acire (06-14-2002 09:39 AM).]

LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

3 posted 2002-06-14 12:22 PM

If you knew the whole story....you wouldn't look at it the same way...

Its complicated

SavingGrace
Junior Member

since 2002-05-31

Posts 26
not yet found

4 posted 2002-06-14 10:17 PM

wow this was soooo good. i rarely reply to any poems except for the exceptional ones. keep writing, i can't wait to read more.

~*Grace*~
You wouldn't be so concerned with what people thought of you if you only knew how seldom they did...

cutiepiesugarbabie
Member

since 2002-06-07

Posts 110
A Cloud In the Sky

5 posted 2002-06-21 04:01 PM

i have to ask...what wa it's job? and why is it no longer dedicated?

cutiepiesugarbabie
Member

since 2002-06-07

Posts 110
A Cloud In the Sky

6 posted 2002-06-21 04:01 PM

i have to ask...what wa it's job? and why is it no longer dedicated?

SlowDrag
Member

since 2002-01-10

Posts 53
Tx...need i say more

7 posted 2002-06-21 07:16 PM

hey i liked this a lot....it was harsh...but i wouldn't quite say controversial....i dunno maybe it's just becausei'm a guy and i've been playing grand theft auto 3 for about 3 days straight (if that won't desensitize you...nothing will.) well keep it up.

and all i wanna do is be there for the things you're going through....well is it good for you?...is it good for you?

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