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cutiepiesugarbabie
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A Cloud In the Sky

0 posted 2002-06-11 02:15 PM


Sitting here all alone, I wonder what I’ve done,
I just keep falling deeper and deeper in trouble
I cannot dig myself out, I’m too deep
God, I need help.
Sometimes I wonder what my limits are

I'll just push
just a little
little bit father
eventually im gonna snap
i can't take much more

someone help me
please
someone help me
please
I don't know what my limits are

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Dopey Dope
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1 posted 2002-06-11 07:12 PM


I thought you did well and expressed your emotions rather honestly.

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MidnightSon
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between the gutter & the stars
2 posted 2002-06-12 02:29 AM


your limits are where you set them.
a good, searching write...

and help is all around you. we're friends in here
and were just an email away.
good luck.

"The soul is oftentimes a battlefield where reason and judgement wage war on passion and appetite."

Acies
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Twilight Zone
3 posted 2002-06-19 09:54 AM


You shouldn't have any limits
You should take what thrown your way and deal with them
always be strong, fight back
thanks for sharing

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


ShortSexyAngelOnEarth
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since 2001-12-24
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im a louisiana cajun princess! lol
4 posted 2002-06-19 04:43 PM


i like this...... very honest and searching..... it makes me think if a truly heart-felt kind of thing. anyways, yea, i really like it!

Maryn
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Allysa
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In an upside-down garden
5 posted 2002-06-19 05:07 PM


This reminds me of myself, not knowing what my limits were and pushing them until I dug it deeper and deeper and simply didn't care.
Wonderful write.  If you ever want someone to talk to, someone to offer advice to you or you would like to give some advice to me, or even like to share stories with, simply email me @
cranberry_bubbles05@yahoo.com

once again, wonderful write....

I've never seen you on the streets of this town, I've never seen you just hanging around, But you still tell me that you know me... ~Justin Sane

songsoftheaftermath
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since 2002-06-19
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a world of disarray
6 posted 2002-06-19 08:53 PM


good poem...maybe youve already found your limits by simply asking yourself what your limitations are. youve already figured out that youve gone too far....
good poem

cutiepiesugarbabie
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A Cloud In the Sky
7 posted 2002-06-20 09:13 AM


Thank you everyone for being so caring-this website and message boards are such a tighknight loving place and i'm glad to be a part of it!
cutiepiesugarbabie
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A Cloud In the Sky
8 posted 2002-06-20 09:13 AM


Thank you everyone for being so caring-this website and message boards are such a tighknight loving place and i'm glad to be a part of it!
cutiepiesugarbabie
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A Cloud In the Sky
9 posted 2002-06-20 09:13 AM


Thank you everyone for being so caring-this website and message boards are such a tighknight loving place and i'm glad to be a part of it!
cutiepiesugarbabie
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since 2002-06-07
Posts 110
A Cloud In the Sky
10 posted 2002-06-20 09:14 AM


Thank you everyone for being so caring-this website and message boards are such a tighknight loving place and i'm glad to be a part of it!
cutiepiesugarbabie
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since 2002-06-07
Posts 110
A Cloud In the Sky
11 posted 2002-06-20 09:14 AM


Thank you everyone for being so caring-this website and message boards are such a tighknight loving place and i'm glad to be a part of it!
Acies
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Twilight Zone
12 posted 2002-06-22 10:53 AM


haha, you just posted that message a million times

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


cutiepiesugarbabie
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Posts 110
A Cloud In the Sky
13 posted 2002-06-22 08:29 PM


eeek i know my computer hates me........i swear techonolgy has a mind of its own so if this post a BILLION times oops! hehe
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